渣打邮件门全文赏析

渣打邮件门老公回复老婆：
Lily,

Please do not b ring the personal issues to the public. The truth of the facts is that our marriage had been falling apart 8 years ago, divorce had been in discussion 5 years ago. Our issues are known to all the people in the word! Diane had done nothing wrong for her part! I am firmly standing by and behind Diane. I will certainly hope she will marry me one day soon!

【评点】
1，首先，我倾向于使用bring sth. “out” to the public。
2，“The truth of the facts ”是很怪的说法（并无不妥），直接说“The fact is”就好。
3，“our marriage had falling apart 8 years ago”语法肯定错了，不知道作者是不是要使用过去完成时态。
4，后面一句更奇怪，最好加“since”（给人感觉是婚姻破碎了3年后才开始考虑离婚的）。基本看到这里就可以看出作者高中英语不是很扎实，连后面world笔误写成了word。
5，“for one’s part”指的是“对某人而言”，“Stand by”是等待的意思，“Stand by one’s side”和“Stand behind someone”基本同义，但后者还有其它意思，略显行文冗余。
6，“hope”不能表达成“will hope”。高考常考。

Trying to tell the people how evil I am and Diane is in this way is not going to succeed! All the people, who knows you, me and our marriage, supported my divorce, including my good friend Zhu Wei. I am sorry I have dragged everyone into this. Lily please move on!

Sincerely yours

Yale

【评点】
1，第一句明显思维混乱了，和成功不成功之间没什么因果联系，典型的中文语境迁移错误。亮点型错误；
2，“drag into”多用于口语表达，相当于involve。

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最后编辑：2010-03-18

作者：龙天

这个作者貌似有点懒，什么都没有留下。

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